Editing my second book in the SOTF series - The Closest Enemy

I've started editing the second in the SOTF series, and I'm quite pleased with what I'm reading. Of course there are over 3million typos, the story tends to stray, the characters are not consistent, and a few times I've shifted dialogue so fast I don't even know who's saying what...but other than that, I really did a good job. LOL

At least I laugh and don't break into sobbing.

Survival of the Fittest - The Closest Enemy

SNEAK PEEK OF THE SECOND IN THE

SURVIVAL OF THE FITTEST SERIES

Book trailers on Youtube

I created 2 book trailers for my books.  The first is for Survival of the Fittest - The Last Hope for the Human Race:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ycVIZx6AxK0

The second is the sneak peek for Survival of the Fittest - The Closest Enemy (currently editing):  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Se2SqHIbpKI&feature=youtu.be

Let me know what you think.  Criticisms are fine too.  I'm a tough person, I can take it.  :)

SOTF - The Closest Enemy is completed

The second book of the Survival of the Fittest series is complete.  Right now it's going through some of my toughest critics.  They will advise me what needs to be changed or added or deleted.

You might be asking, "Who are his toughest critics?"

The people who the book is for - young adults.  There are about five kids who have asked to read my second book because they loved the first.  They are and always will be the toughest critics.  To be a great YA author, I feel I need to hear their thoughts in order to write something that will be successful.


I feel very fortunate to have them reading my book.